I was kinda bored, so I started writing :3
I'm not sure about it, but feedback would be nice:)
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The sun shines,
Yet I stand alone,
Alone in my thoughts,
Alone,
The last living person on earth.

The deafening silence,
No birds,
No playing children,
No traffic or shouting.
Alone.

No one there to hear my scream,
No one left to care,
Life passing by,
But still I stand.

The lush green fields,
The towering mountains,
The countryside,
The sea,
Left for me alone.

The people walk away from me,
Ignore me,
Despise me,
Hate my existence,
And leave me there.

Alone.

That was really beautiful! I especially loved your repetition of the word 'alone' and how you put it on a seperate line each time to emphasise it! :D

For some constructive criticism:

You write that you are the last living person on Earth but at the end, you write 'the people walk away from me'. Is this poem to represent the fact that no one likes this person and everyone has left them or is it literal, meaning you are, in fact, the last person? Because if it's the latter, it wouldn't make sense...I might just be being thick though xDD

Tybs wrote:That was really beautiful! I especially loved your repetition of the word 'alone' and how you put it on a seperate line each time to emphasise it! :D

For some constructive criticism:

You write that you are the last living person on Earth but at the end, you write 'the people walk away from me'. Is this poem to represent the fact that no one likes this person and everyone has left them or is it literal, meaning you are, in fact, the last person? Because if it's the latter, it wouldn't make sense...I might just be being thick though xDD

It's like, the person feels like they're the last person on earth because everyone ignores them and just walks by.

Rachel wrote:

Tybs wrote:That was really beautiful! I especially loved your repetition of the word 'alone' and how you put it on a seperate line each time to emphasise it! :D

For some constructive criticism:

You write that you are the last living person on Earth but at the end, you write 'the people walk away from me'. Is this poem to represent the fact that no one likes this person and everyone has left them or is it literal, meaning you are, in fact, the last person? Because if it's the latter, it wouldn't make sense...I might just be being thick though xDD

It's like, the person feels like they're the last person on earth because everyone ignores them and just walks by.

Ah, I understand now :)
It's an amazing poem <3

Thanks:D<3

That was amazing!!! I love how you made it so simple, without waffly lines and words- it just made the whole thing seem more real and special.